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December 7, 2012
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:icondream0rdie:
A comic adaption based of [link]
:iconshortskirtsxplosions: is the original author, I highly recommend reading his work.

And incase you didn't know. I'm a brony. C: This will probably be the ONLY page I was submit here. I want to complete the entire chapter before I post it.

Edit: Thank you :iconshortskirtsxplosions: for critiqing it. I hope this fixes the text problem. :(

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:iconderpmind:
A shame "Anthropology" and "Background Pony" are so incompatible. Nevertheless, both of them are great, and so is this comic. :)
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:iconmichael1st:
how long does it take for you to make these comics?
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~Dream0rDie May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Depends on my mood I guess? If I'm in a good mood, I can finish in maybe 8 hours. if I'm in a crappy one it could take a day or two.
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:iconmichael1st:
you see, i make my comics every week, but each day seems to be a bit difficult for me to managed to make the quota; plus i sometimes worried that it's affecting my drawing style.
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~Dream0rDie May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
First, theres no quota unless your being payed. I used to have that same mindset up until around page 30 in my own comic. You need to go with your own pace, your art will grow accordingly, don't worry about consistancy cause your not a profession.

I'm not a professional either, and probably never will be. Just go with the flow.

Sorry my first post I replied to myself on accident, but seriously. It's all about flow and comfort, you need to have that if you want creativity to flow well into your comic.
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:iconmichael1st:
I have see some of your and its very similar to the manga style, but i'm just wondering(if its not too much trouble)if you could see some of my comics and tell me what you think?
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~Dream0rDie May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your comic is very well done!

My only gripe is too many panels. With that many panels, it feels kind of.. squashed? I would go 7 panels, max or 8, but never more than 10.

But other than that, your comic is very high quality. But use less panels, that way the reader can "see" what really going on, and not read squashed panels with abunch of words in them. Lesser panels can also make it easier to guide the reader to words faster.

Which doesn't just apply to manga, but to all comical forms.

Hope that helps.
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:iconmichael1st:
thank, and i'll try to stick on that advice.
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:iconambris:
Mood: Love ~Ambris May 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Hey there, just wanted to let you know I drew Lyra as she appears in this comic, and linked back to this comic.

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Thanks for the inspiration. Looking forward to updates!
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